Guide
How to write a college transfer application essay
A transfer essay has a different job from a first-year essay. Admissions readers want to know why you're leaving, what you'll do differently, and why their school is the right next step, all without sounding negative about where you are now.
What transfer readers are looking for
- A clear reason. Why transfer, and why now? Specific academic or personal goals are more convincing than general dissatisfaction.
- A plan. What will you study, and how does this school make it possible? Name programs, courses, or opportunities you can't get where you are.
- Evidence of readiness. What have you done in college so far that shows you'll succeed? Courses, projects, jobs, and responsibilities all count.
- Maturity. Explain what you've learned, including from setbacks, without blaming your current school or the people there.
The Common App transfer essay
The Common App for transfer students commonly asks for a statement about your reasons for transferring and the goals you hope to achieve. Some colleges set their own question or add supplements, so check each school's requirements and word limits in the application.
UC transfer Personal Insight Questions
Transfer applicants to the University of California answer four questions of up to 350 words each. One is required and asks how you've prepared for your intended major. You choose the other three from seven options. See UC Admissions for the exact wording, and my UC Personal Insight Questions guide for how to approach them.
Common mistakes
- Criticizing your current school. Focus on what you're moving toward, not what you're escaping.
- Reusing your first-year essay. You've changed since high school, and the essay should show it.
- Being vague about the new school. “Better opportunities” could apply anywhere. Be specific.
- Leaving out the major. Most transfer readers want to see a clear academic direction.
Transfer applicants often have tight timelines and several applications at once. I coach transfer students one-on-one, online. See also supplemental essays and how to write the “Why this college” essay.
Questions families ask
What should a transfer essay focus on?
Your reasons for transferring, your academic goals, and why the new school is the right place to reach them, supported by specific examples from your time in college.
Can I reuse my first-year college essay?
It's better not to. Transfer readers want to see who you are now and what you've done in college.
Do UC transfer applicants have a required question?
Yes. Transfer applicants answer four Personal Insight Questions, including a required one about how they've prepared for their intended major.